I showed up one morning to visit a client. Her apartment was laid out in such a way that you had to cut through the kitchen on your way in, and as I was passing through I noticed two cold slices of toast sticking up from the toaster. I found the client, Karen, in the living room clutching to a third slice of toast with both hands as she nibbled nervously at it. "Karen", I said gently, as I typically did in such situations, "you know that there are already two slices of toast in the toaster."
"I can't go back in there.", she shook her head on the verge of panic. Her eyes were sore and bulging, and for a second I saw it just as she did, the shadow lurking in the doorway at the end of the counter. I crossed the room and took her in my arms, drawing her towards me. "I know there are dark places sometimes. It's alright. It's all going to be okay."
But as she started away from me, I began to think of the worst thing I could do at the moment. I thought of how awful it would be if I came up behind her and grabbed her and let out a loud yelp. You know, like a joke. And then somehow I found myself compelled forward, actually doing it whether I wanted to or not. I grabbed her and yelled, and I ended up startling myself so much that I woke up.

Now that's an excellent short short story @ 307 words exactly. The ideal length for this genre, I fancy.
ReplyDeleteThe pop tart genre? ;D
DeleteBut yeah, I manage to achieve a certain economy here. I don't always pull that off.
Interesting dream, Bryan. My reaction is that you have some anxiety about hurting someone you are supposed to or want to be helping. Perhaps she's a slutty entertainer? (a pop tart? hahahaha I'll be here all week!)
ReplyDeleteI dunno. On the other hand, maybe I've been subconsciously selling ad space in my dreams, and this was some kind of product placement. ;D
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